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FRONT PAGE DRAFT 1& FEEDBACK

I asked four people from my target audience to give me feedback on my first draft of the front page.  The general likes weres:

The image

The title 

The plus sign 

 

The general feedback on room for improvement was:

Not everything needs to be in capital letters 

More promoted content an dmix up the colours 

The price needs to be near the barcode

 

Therefore; I will take this feedback on board and implement it into my magazine cover to give the target audience what they want.  

After the feedback I received, I made another and more detailed flat plan (left).  I have added promoted content, moved the price and not put everything in capital letters and will implement this all into the remake of the front page.  

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